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JoKeR September 28th, 2018, 7:19 am
I felt in the old version that you did write your self into a corner... or dead end. ;)
But this newer stuff feels much better.
Dins September 28th, 2018, 7:35 am
I'm glad you like it more! I'm happy I made the change too, I'd left out too much information and didn't give the characters room to breathe or express their motivations well...