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AlpineBob (Guest) January 13th, 2018, 11:15 pm
Nice stuff!
The intro grabbed me, and I'm curious to see how this all fits together.
One thing - it looks like out blonde hero is speaking in the second panel because his head is between the speaker and the bubble (it confused me for a few moments). You might want to try to avoid that in future.
(In this instance, flipping the tail from bottom to top might help.)
Dins January 14th, 2018, 5:12 pm
@AlpineBob: Oh, thank you for the feedback! I hadn't even noticed that issue yet... I'll make sure to keep this stuff in mind! :)